this was one of my initial attempts of writing poetry.
i wrote it in 2005, while i was in college, working
on my final design collection. 4 years down the line,
my factual memory seems to have faded a bit, but the
feelings remain (they always do); and it was during
that process that these thoughts were born, which
inspired me to make this effort.
and, after this, it seems like i have set a standard for
myself, which i have not been able to achieve again
so far, but this is not the end, its just a beginning.
"they stand in twos and threes,
the jungle eyes of the women's laughter
breaking the glass
there is an untouched static of posssibility here
around which they construct their night talk,
of concepts toppling,
and designs crashing,
of problematic progeny,
and irritating mortals,
a possibility that sometimes
allows a woman to touch herself just so,
letting the possibility gather the static,
and shiver and turn steel,
a deadly scimitar that may slash through a heart
to turn to dust, or rust and bend,
and sheathe itself in some tired room within
when the final words of hurtful accusation have been felt."
have i read this before..?.i have a feeling...send it to some competition...its tooo goood..
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